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Antonio's Ending


Today was one of those days you whished you lived with normal people.
Gilbert had woken you up at the crack of dawn (Really 7:01) , to tell you that Francis and Him were going shoping.

An hour later when you had nearly fallen back asleep, dance music started to play. Very LOUD dance music.  And you knew exactly who was playing it.
God Damn it. Rolling out of bed you sleeply stumbled into the living room. Ready to chew the Spaniard out.

Only you couldn't. You stared at the sight that greeted you, not knowing if you should laugh or faint from shock.

Antonio stood in the middle of the room in an gawdy pirate costume, grinning like an idiot. Knee-high boots, an open shirt, a huge hat and veeeeeeeeery tight pants.Not to mention a bunch of earings. It was the sexiest sight you had ever seen.

"What are you doing Antonio?" Trying  your best not to stare, you fiddled with the hem of your shirt.

Grinning he grabbed you into a hug, "I'm so glad your awake _________!"
Your face was smushed against his tanned chest. It took every ounce of willpower in your body not to faint.

"And why is that?" He smelled like cinnomon and tomatoes. Geez, your willpower was draining fast. "I'm going to dance with you!" Confused you looked up. He was smiling, his emerald eyes dancing.

"Dance with me? Why?" Your question seemed to puzzle him, and for a second you swear you saw his smile flicker. "Because I....." He trailed off, still smiling. Something about the simle was sad. Pulling away, he walked over to the stereo and shut if off.

Dat Ass.

"You want something to eat?" He didn't turn aroud as he whipped the hat off his head.

"Sure, I guess." You watched as he slummped into the kitchen.

Awww Geeez. I hurt his feelings! You though, WHY am I such an idiot? Running your hand through your hair, you slouched back into your room.

------Antonio's part of veiw--------

Sighing I pulled some churros out of the fridge. I wanted to tell the chica today, but the way she had asked why. My heart squeezed in sadness. I guess maybe today wasn't the day.

"Antonio!" I straightened at the sound of her voice. Turning around I nearly tripped at the sight of her.

-------Reader's point of veiw-------

You stood in the pirate costume Francis had given you for your birthday. Yes it was a bit shorter than you would have liked it to be, but it was the only thing you had at the moment.

"Lets dance!"

Dropping the churros, he smacked the play button on the stereo.
The next few minutes were a whirl-wind as he spun you around in compilcated dance steps.
After a while he slowed down, grinning down at you.

"What?" You blushed, His eyes bore into yours, "Can I tell you a secret chica?"
Nodding you realized that you had stopped moving.

"There's this girl I like and I don't know how to tell her."
For some strange reason, you felt your heart sink. "W-who?" His face was completely serious now.

"Weeeeell She has this really cute smile, and pretty (eye color eyes) aaaaaaaaaaaand beautiful hair." He looked expectently at you.

The sinking feeling got worse. "She sounds pretty."

He nodded, staring, "How do I tell her amiga?"

Shrugging you stepped away. It felt as if your heart was in your stomache, "Just tell her I guess." You looked at your feet. Why did you feel this way?

"Ok then." He tilted his head to the side

"Te amo."

You looked up confused, "What?"

Wraping his arms around your waist, he grinned, "Te amo."
Blushing you tried to wriggle out of his grasp. "W-what? You know I don't speak spa-"
His lips cut off the rest of your words. Sweet and soft, he tasted of Tomatoes. You pulled away, reluctently, smiling slightly.

"I love you too Toni."

------Gilbert's point of veiw--------

"Can you see anyzing?" I called up to Francis. He was standing on my shoulders trying to look inside. "Non! 'E closed the blinds! Zat little..." The last part of his sentence was a mumble.

"Should ve try a different widow?" As thin as he was Francis was killing my shoulders.

"How about you leave them alone?" A scarily familiar voice hissed.

I slowly turned my head. It was Elizabeta.

"RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!" I bolted, Francis fell of my shoulders, a perfect target for her.

"YOU ASS!!!" He shrieked

"Suck it loser!" No way I was going back
Its a bit fluffy :I

When ever I think of Spain it goes like this




Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya-san
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SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
gilbert sounds so much like me in that last part

... i'm listening to cotten eye joe... beest muusic ever
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I pewdiepied him :iconpewdiepieplz:
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Yes you did.
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wooooooohooooooooooo #Jerome jarr
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