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BTTxReader (with Baby Germany, Little Canada and young Romano)
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GOD! You hated the mall.
Filled with loud fast talking assholes who slammed into their shoulders into yours, then glared at YOU like you were the rude one.

High-heels clicked, phones beeped and children wailed. Wait, what?

"Papa!!"  You stopped were you were and frowned. "Papa!" A little voice sobbed.
There it was again. Spinning around you looked for the source of the voice. Across the corridor, standing between a potted plant and a stone pillar, where three little figures.

"Papa!" People walked by, not even sparing a glance towards the crying child. It disgusted you. Here where three little, lost, crying children, and their fellow humans didn't even think they were worth stopping for.

Looking around you scanned for a worried looking father or mother.

Nada.

Just a creepy guy in a tattered coat, who was slowly inching his way towards the trio. Not Good.

Your maternal instinct kicked into overdrive. You had to get to them before he did. Pushing your way through the crowd (exchanging a few of your favorite curse words along the way) you finally made it.

The one crying was a little boy, about 4 or 5,  with wavy blonde hair and violet eyes. He sniffed, startled to see an adult standing infront of him. Next to him stood a boy, who you guessed to be about 8 or 9. He glared with amber eyes,  a fist-full of his chestnut hair, in the hand of a two year old he was holding. The blonde baby blinked at you with sleepy blue eyes.

"Are you guys lost?" The little crying child wiped his eyes with a pudgy fist. "I want Papaaaaa!" He wailed.

"That-a Spanish Bastardo left-a us here." The eight year-old glared at the floor, his grip tightening on the baby. You frowned, "Why did he leave you?" The eight-year-old shrugged, "They probably went to-a pick up-a ladies." Your frown deepened, "They?" The little blonde boy nodded, "Papa and his friends."

If looks could kill.

You quickly rearranged your features, not wanting to scare the children. "What are your names?"

"This is-a Ludwig, My name is-a Lovino." The strange curl on his head bounced. You smiled, "Those are really neat names." You turned towards the little violet-eyed kid.

"What about you?" He shrugged and stared at the floor. "I'm Matthew."  

"Ich will meinen Bruder." a slightly monotone high-pitched voice grumbled. You jumped, shocked.

"D-did he just speak?" You pointed at Ludwig, who was poker-faced. Lovino rolled his eyes," Si, I've-a been trying to-a teach-a him English, but he-a only speaks German." You stared in awe, "U-um miss?"

Glancing down you felt your heart pang. These poor kids. What kind of Bastard fathers left their children all alone in the middle of a crowded mall.

"Ich bin hungrig" Ludwig streched a pudgy fist in your direction. "What did he say?" You asked. Lovino blushed, "It-a dosen't-a matter." His stomache rummbled.

"Are you guys hungry? How long have you been standing here?" Lovino looked away, "It-a isn't important" Clearly Ludwig wasn't happy, He grapped the strange curl on Lovino's head

"Essen und Bruder jetzt!" He bawled. Lovino's blush rivaled the color of tomatos. He was upset, you could tell by the way he was bitting his lip. "Do you guys want to get something to eat?" Matthew nodded.

Ludwig started chanting" Ja, Ja, Ja, Ja, Ja, Ja!!!" Lovino sighed. "If-a you don't-a mind." Smiling you shook your head,"Its ok you guys." "Um what kind of food do you guys eat?"


"Pancakes" "Tomatoes" "Wurst".


------Time Skip------

The four of you sat in a resturant. You had finished your lunch already.

Lovino was on his third plate of pasta , Matthew his second plate of pancakes and Ludwig (having finished his wurst) was nawing on a bread crust.

"Why did your dads leave you?"

Lovino snorted into his pasta.

"Francis is-a Matthews father, Antonio babysits-a me, and-a Gilbert is-a Ludwigs brother."

"Bruder!" Ludwig hiccupped.

Leaning on an elbow you frowned, "So they just leave you to pick up women?" Lovino shrugged "I don't-a really know". What douche bags, it took all of your will power not to spit it out. Picking up your glass, you took a drink of water.

"They are-a Douche bags." Choking you stared at Lovino, "Where did you learn that?" He shrugged. "Well!" You sat up, "Why don't we find them?" Matthew nodded, "I want Papa!"


-------Spain's Point of veiw-----


We strolled down the long hallway, Francis was eyeing women while Gilbert prattled on about something awesome he had done.

It was nice.

The kids were no doubt in awe of everything around them. Spotting a gaint toy store I grinned,

"You guys wanna go in?"

no reply

"Kids?" Glancing behind I froze.

They were gone.

"SHIT!!!!" Spinning around I searched frantically for Lovino and the others. In a crowd like this they could be crushed, especially baby Ludwig. "SHIIIIT!!!" Grabbing handfuls of my hair I started to panic.

"ESTO NO ES BUENO!!"



-------Gilbert's point of View--------


"So zen ZE AWESOME ME vas ---" I broke off a Toni started to curse, then babble in Spanish.

"VAS ZE FUCK TONI?" I spun around, offended by his reation. The spainiard was frantically whipping his head from side to side, his face twisted with worry.

He kinda looked like he was having a fit. And then I realized why. The kids were no where in sight.

" WO IST MEIN BRUDER?!" I shrieked, in an unawesomely high pitched voice. I grapped Toni's shirt collar.

"VHAT HAS YOUR ITALIAN CHILD DONE VITH MEIN BRUDER?!!"

Flecks of my spit hit his face. "I don't know, I don't know." He started to hyperventilate. Bile crawled up my throat.
My breath snorted out of my nose in short gasps.


-------Francis's point of veiw-------



This mall had to be one of the best places to pick up women. I winked at a giggling redhead. She blushed, ducking her head.

So cute.

Behind me Toni ruined the moment by cursing then going off in spainish. I smirked, Gil must have said something. Then Gil started to rant in German.

Strange.

I glanced over my shoulder, confused. Antonio was on his knees, sobbing. Gilbert had a security guard by the collar and was shouting in German at the poor man.

I frowned. What was wrong with them? Couldn't we just have ONE day were there were no dramatics?  

I quickly scanned the crowd that was making a wide circle around us. What could have possible set them off?

Wait..... Where was Matthew?

The conclusion slowly seeped its way into my brain. "GAAAH!! I shrieked "NON NON NON!!!"



-------Reader's Point of Veiw----


You walked at a steady pace down the hallway.

Ludwig was nestled in the crook of your arm, his little head resting on your shoulder.

Matthew was balanced on your other hip, humming softly.

Lovino walked next to you, his hand gripping tightly to the hem of your shirt.

"Do you huys see them yet?" Lovino shook his head, "No" His bottom lip trembled. After a few more moments you noticed a commotion head.

Pushing your way through the gathered crowd, you saw three hysterical men. One of them was on his knees bawling, his tanned hands tangled in his chocolate brown hair.
Next to him a stood a guy with shoulder length blonde hair, his hands shook as he looked around frantically.
The last man was yelling at a security guard in German. His white hair shone under the florecent mall lights.

"Bruder!" Ludwigs squeal startled you. He was gurgling happily, reaching out towards the albino.

"Are they your gaurdians?" You looked down at Lovino. He nodded obviously annoyed.

"Si. That-a tomato bastard had to-a make a scene." You smiled as he ran over to the sobbing Antonio. Who upon seeing him grabbed him into a bone-crushing hug.

Poor kid.

Matthew wriggled out of you arms, and ran at Francis. "PAPAAAAAAAAAA!" He shrieked. He also was swept into a hug.

Walking over to the albino you tapped his shoulder, "Um Gilbert?" did you remember his name right? He spun around, briliant red eyes flashing. Startled you stumbled back a step. His eyes widened further.

"LUDWIG!!!" He grabbed you around the waist, burying his face in the little boys neck. "I vas so vorried!!!"

You started to feel guilty about thinking they were douche bags. They were just concerned men. Probably had been searching for hours. His hand slid down to your ass.  

................


"SMACK"


"GAH!! Damn it Mädel!!"


------Baby Ludwig's point of veiw-----

My stupid Bruder was smacked across the face. It wasn't the first time either.
Inside I laughed quietly.
Does this really count as a BTTxReader? I'm not really sure :I

Part two [link]

Translations (I got most of these off google translate)

_German_
Ich will meinen Bruder- I want my brother

Ich bin hungrig- I'm hungry

Essen und Bruder jetzt- Food and Brother now

Bruder- Brother

WO IST MEIN BRUDER- Where is my brother

Mädel- Girl ( :iconask-sanmarino: Suggested I use Mädel, Süße or Kleine instead of Frau. So thank you for your sugestion!)


_Spanish_
ESTO NO ES BUENO- This is not good


_French_

Non-No





Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya-san
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:iconriley-phantomhive:
riley-phantomhive Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was ace! Absolutely mental!!!!!!!!!
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
I loved that last line!
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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:iconpicklequeenofninjas:
PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
You're welcome!
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TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
I can't believe that the Google Translate-thingy worked so well with the German sentences here XDDDD But might also be because the structure of a sentence in both languages is almost the same... Oh well!
I could imagine the BTT-Trio freaking out - I could REALLY imagine it! It's so amazing, really. XD
And I'm glad you didn't use "Frau", it sometimes annoys me to the point that I simply can't explain, because German men don't just say "Ugh, Frau!". "Mädel" is a good word to say there! :heart:
Keep up the good work. =]
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
:>
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TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
:D
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kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
BAD GILBERT
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:iconostara-frost:
Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
xD
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pktcat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Artist
LOL.
1. I lmao'd when they freaked out.
2. WELL DUH IT AIN'T GOOD.
3. I feel ya Lovi, I feel ya.
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Writer
:>
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Griffonmender Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

"Spotting a gaint toy store I grinned" I believe you meant giant.

I have to love how they are all like "what is up with him" before they also begin panicking. XD

Clearly, these three were not cut out for this. :rofl:

I feel sorry for that security guy though. ^^; 

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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Writer
xD Yeah
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yes this actually seems like it would happen
specially the whole hand on-ass thing -_-'
aw cute ludwig knows that his brother deserves it owo
nice sweet story by the way your a very talented writer ^o^
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
:> Thank you so much!
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Greenzebra00 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMG I died when I was reading this!!!!

"If looks could kill." That would be me! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Writer
xD
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bitchycancer Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"SHIT!!!!" "SHIIIIT!!!" "ESTO NO ES BUENO!!" that's exactly what I say when I start to panic, with a hint of "OLVIDE MIS LENTES OTRA VEZ, CARAJO!"
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Writer
xD
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bitchycancer Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr XD
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iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I love the end XD
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Hyo38 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gilbert if you like it you better put a ring in it.
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Writer
xD
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lilymath Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...>wheeze<...this is awesome, good work :D
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
:>
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LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
BABY GERMANY!!!! :squee: 

Ha... their panicking made me laugh. Idiots... :)
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Writer
:>
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Aero-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
They are so cute! Aw geez, BTT XD
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
:D
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Aero-Dragon Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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siiben Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
so funny and cute!!! that was just awesome!!!!
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!!
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puiwi Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Read this a second time, still extremely funny XD
I only go to the mall for barnes and nobles for manga
And hot topic for anime and adventure time merchandise (they gots hetalia stuffs in there!!)
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Student Writer
Awesome! :>
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puiwi Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Kufufu~
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Bawne Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconlegaspplz: What is this 'Mall' You speakest' of? [Is awesomely Scottish and Scotland has no Malls. D:]
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Student Writer
xD
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Y0uk0 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
"VAS ZE FUCK" just loved it! 
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
:D
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SilverMoon75 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
That was awesome!
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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bluepanda9 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
when it said ( god you hated the mall ) I was like ( are you spying on me becase I don't like going to the mall 2, but my mom always have to force me ._.
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
xD I get the same feeling.
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I Loved The Story A LOT!!!!
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ur Welcome!!!
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Ostara-Frost Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
:>
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
X3
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor guys, poor kids, poor me!!!! That was adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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